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Tab new paragraphs.
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Present the research question in the intro paragraph.
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The “Introduction” is the first paragraph, not the second. The second paragraph should be personal experience, meaning your personal experience. Right now the paragraph is very general; reword it to address YOUR personal experience.
ALICIA ROMERO , Avoid brief paragraphs as they are undeveloped in comparison to the rest of the essay. Expand on them or reword them to combine them with the preceding or following paragraphs.
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Ensure you have a paragraph that addresses your personal experience; follow the outline suggested for this essay and revise accordingly. Also, you can only cite from 6 sources, thus you need to condense the citations.